Short, sweet and to the point!

by Hannah (Aged 12)
(England)

DOn't always go for long, dreary sentences! All you're doing is loosing attention and interest! The odd short sentence here or there can make all the difference, and can often add impact. Also, try to break up sentences over three lines (I.E. Sentence that could easily be paragraphs), and possibly edit them so they have less long 'pretty' words, less connectives etc.