Beginning sentences with pronouns
(Melbourne, Victoria, Australia)
The title is a bit misleading but I couldn't think of what to call this problem. I'm writing an action story and end up saying "He did this. She did that..." alot. There are a few times when I manage to start the sentence with something else without making it sound weird but most of the time (for example in fight scenes) I use the character's name or s/he to begin most sentences. It becomes repetitive to read. Do you have any suggestions for writing action heavy scenes without the repetitiveness?