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Extend your metaphors: Editor's Notes #236 May 31, 2017 |
| Hello, Without getting into the technicalities of how I made the mistake, I am apologizing for sending issue 236 with the subject line of issue 235. I am sorry for any confusion this may have caused you. This additional issue contains the same information as the one you received about eight hours ago, so if you read that material, there is nothing new here except this mea culpa. -- Larry McMurtry In this issue: 1. Extend your metaphors 2. Tickled my funnybone 3. Interesting Web site 4. Writing prompt 1. Extend your metaphors In our last issue, we looked at what metaphors do. If you are unclear about what metaphors are and do, see the last issue: https://www.writershelper.com/Editors_Notes-235.html Now it’s time to consider extending metaphors. An extended metaphor is one that goes beyond one sentence. This allows the writer to consider the similarities of the two ideas with more depth and breadth. As the reader spends more focused time noticing how two things are the same, the impression the writer makes is deepened. Press long enough in one place and you may change the shape of someone else’s thinking. Did you notice the extended metaphor in the previous paragraph? Time, pressure, and depth join together to suggest that writing can change the physical shape of things and also change minds. That’s a metaphor extended over one paragraph. Some writers manage to keep a metaphor throughout a piece. This happens most often in poetry, but some writers manage to sustain a metaphor to the end of a whole book. When I wrote Get Your Writing Fighting Fit I was thinking of the way writing engages in the battle for minds. Most of the book shows similarities between preparation for a physical fight and the pugilism of words. Look at these chapter titles: Strip Down Cut Empty Calories Get Active Strength Training Mix it Up (Now I might call that one Cross-training) A Quick Fitness Assessment I overtly wanted my readers to think of bits of my book whenever they saw or thought about physical struggles. Many writers rely on the triggering mechanism of the human mind to think of one thing when presented with another with similar characteristics. What can you do to increase your skill when it comes to using metaphors? =========== 2.Tickled my funnybone He acquired his size from too much pi. =========== 3. Interesting Web site Use the link below to find excellent extended metaphors. https://blog.udemy.com/extended-metaphor-examples/ =========== 4. Writing prompt Did you recall any metaphors you found since reading the last issue of Editor’s Notes? If so, extend one of those into at least one more sentence. If you can’t recall one, create one now and extend it as far as you can. =========== Join Writer's Helper Facebook page at https://www.facebook.com/WritersHelperEditor Follow me on Twitter @AudreytheEditor Link on LinkedIn https://ca.linkedin.com/in/audreyowen (Email me first so I know how you know me.) =========== If you know a writer who would appreciate receiving Editor's Notes, forward this issue. If someone has passed this on to you, you can get your own free subscription by signing up at https://www.writershelper.com/newsletter.html |
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