Keep a Good Pace
by Sare
(TX)
The reader needs a steady dose of interesting as the story moves on. Often times, I find that somewhere in the middle of a story, things are dragging on and on and on... (and on and on)
When reading a story, it's not fun to have a whole bunch of facts dumped on you, but neither is waiting forever to know more details. Keeping a good pace when revealing parts and pieces of the story will help a lot.